Debra Squyres Poet Free verse

Unwrapping a Day With Hope

Unwrapping a Day With Hope

reflections
in a mirror
wear questions
a soul barren
of answers---
unequivocal

travailing
considerations
traverse
the spirit
cycling ideas
undeniable

it is
it’s now
unquestionable
clinging now
to grace
indisputable

wrapping
with faith 
the questions
unwrapping
the gift
of hope
 

All Rights Reserved @ Debra Squyres 2013

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Suzanne Delaney May 14, 2013 at 12:10 AM I loved reading this and hope is our uppermost defense as flimsy as it can be. Hugs, SuZ

Christine Phillips May 3, 2013 at 11:14 AM I like the beautiful arrangement of your thoughts which creates a strong image in this piece. After all... hope is what keeps us alive.

Nette Onclaud May 2, 2013 at 11:13 AM such a tranquil scene you have described here with your beautiful words, debra.. nice to read you again after my long leave... wowzee!..:) huggs

Donna Jones May 2, 2013 at 7:43 AM Yes we wake and close our eyes with hope in our hearts...wonderful poem...

Harry Horsman May 1, 2013 at 3:00 AM love your unique approach to this wonderful poetry...

Duke Beaufort April 29, 2013 at 5:20 PM You gotta have...hope! Your ability in the realm of poets is undeniable. Poems about questions are a lot of fun to read. Thanks for this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 11:14 AM Never give up hope Debra, then you "lose" yourself. - A very well written poem, thank you! - Have a nice and warm day. - (here it is rain + wind) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey April 28, 2013 at 5:53 PM I agree with all your commenters. A captivating write that locks the reader into each line that packs a punch. Great Creativity

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2013 at 6:44 PM I like this interesting format of your poem making us focus on each phrase of it, Debra. Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey April 25, 2013 at 5:35 PM You've written a spectacular and enlightening write here my friend! I am enamored by the splendor of this incredible poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Robert Johnson April 25, 2013 at 2:42 PM Each phrase demands attention to see the depth of it's meaning. Very thought provoking and appreciatively insightful. Takes a beautiful soul to say such things. Peace. :)