Unwrapped

Standing underneath the tree
                  Set and ready, just for me
Christmas morn held my surprise
      Through my half shut, sleepy eyes

There I saw this massive stand
              As my mama shook my hand
Leading me then to explore
        Brand new county "General Store”

As the owner of this shop
         More than just a “Mom and Pop”
I could stock and sell so much
         Cans and pasta, beans and such

Register with money stacked 
                  Coins and bills to be exact
Sat upon the counter stall
                Customers were not so tall!

Props and shelves and goods galore
                   All set for tycoons of four
Too big for a box to fill
               Perfect for a childhood thrill

With this memory in place 
  Mom said, “should’ve seen your face”
As she watched my spirits lift
            For this perfect Christmas gift
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Legros Kelley Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 10:38 PM
Congratulations on your high placing win in the poetry contest Mike. Thank you so much for your wonderful contribution. What a sweet memory for you, as well as for your mom :) May God bless you in the coming new year with many more happy memories, good health and much joy!
Gentile Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Thank you so much BJ!! Your contest was such fun and I am so happy that you liked my poem Happy Holidays!!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. Good memories are the best. Have a Blessed Day......................
Gentile Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 5:41 PM
Thanks so Paula and Merry Christmas xxoo
Alex Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:26 AM
A very beautiful poem on the theme. Your writings are always interesting and thought-provoking. Congratulations!
Gentile Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 1:00 PM
You’re so kind! Thanks Christuraj!!!
Koplin Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on your win Mike!
Gentile Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thanks so much Mark and Merry Christmas!!
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 3:02 PM
what wonderful memories Mike:-) this was a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
December 15, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Thanks so much Jan !!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Hello Mike, oh -that must have been a Christmas you never forgotten. Happy Monday. xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Happy Tuesday Mike. xxoo.Darlene
Gentile Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Happy Monday Darlene, Thanks xxoo
Hankins Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Such a wonderful Christmas memory, Mike. I think we all had that "perfect Christmas" gift at some time in our childhood. Lovely memory; great writing!
Gentile Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Thanks so much Milton!
Lane Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 6:36 AM
There are some Christmas memories that will last forever. Yours is such a one to hold on to. Nice write, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Thanks Lin, I know that I am blessed !!
Cunningham Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 6:06 AM
Happy memories of Christmas time as a child, they were certainly the best. Good luck in the contest Mike. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Gentile Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Tom!!
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Perfect gift---your poem celebrates sweet memories of the festive seasons. Well done, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Thank so much Vijay!!
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