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Unworthy

Rejection is like a bucket of cold water That freezes you deep inside Unworthy, unwanted, undesirable Feeling like an invisible being. Like a dark cloud that lies over your head Drowning to the depth of sorrowness Sinking to deeper levels of confussion Looking like a walking zombie. An empty sensation inside you as Your interior were stripped off In many parts leaving an hollow in The soul with mended pieces. 11-3-2015

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Date: 11/3/2015 8:34:00 PM
Dear Nayda, No rejection here, only admiration for pouring out your heart in awesome poetry. Hugs, chuck
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/3/2015 9:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Chuck. Regards, Nayda

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