Unworthy

Rejection is like a bucket of cold water
             That freezes you deep inside
         Unworthy, unwanted, undesirable 
             Feeling like an invisible being.
 
     Like a dark cloud that lies over your head
        Drowning to the depth of sorrowness
        Sinking to deeper levels of confussion
              Looking like a walking zombie.

            An empty sensation inside you as
               Your interior were stripped off
           In many parts leaving an hollow in
               The soul with mended pieces.




11-3-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Melugin Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Dear Nayda, No rejection here, only admiration for pouring out your heart in awesome poetry. Hugs, chuck
Negron Flores Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 9:00 PM
Thank you very much Chuck. Regards, Nayda
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