Unwind

Go and get some air
Heart may be full of worry
A day you need care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 7:14 AM
excellent. perhaps change center line: “heart may be full of worry” My mom would tell my adult self to make sure I got out of the house into fresh air. She knew how important that was and I am thankful for this piece of advice! God bless!
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 3:38 AM
Thanks, Miss Kim, I followed your suggestion change center line and I've done editing it.
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