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Go and get some air Heart may be full of worry A day you need care.

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Date: 3/25/2024 7:14:00 AM
excellent. perhaps change center line: “heart may be full of worry” My mom would tell my adult self to make sure I got out of the house into fresh air. She knew how important that was and I am thankful for this piece of advice! God bless!
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Date: 3/26/2024 3:38:00 AM
Thanks, Miss Kim, I followed your suggestion change center line and I've done editing it.

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