Unveiled

A thin line between two worlds,  
Eyes closed and opened,
Another world welcomes you,
You're ushered to a different realm,     
The soul is on a voyage,
Transient or forever to stay.



May 12, 2022,
Bite Size Poem No. 43 Poetry Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Lovely way to express this mystery ~
Emate Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, Line.
Agustin Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Emate Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 9:24 AM
Amen! I'm glad you like it.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 10:20 AM
A well-penned poem about a fascinating topic, Emate...congrats on your placement! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Emate Avatar
May 15, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Rhonda. It's an honour.
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