Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

Unusual Roar

"On the ocean waves" of deep cobalt blue
Rides white foam spray that brushes rocky shore
Tickles their fantasy leaves in quick spew
After has caused such unusual roar

Rocky shore, rocky times life gives damp sprays
Coating everyone with uncertainties
Just as the rocks wear and age_ life assays
Each one to analyze the quantities

Of good_bad giving opportunities
To all to grow deeper like blue ocean
Deeper than surface waves _deep abilities
Just few minutes each day in devotion

"On the ocean waves" ride thoughts_emotions
Let them be deeper accumulations

Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Contest: "On The Ocean Waves"

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 9, 2012 at 10:27 AM A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Sara. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 5, 2012 at 9:49 AM A clever and thoughtful write, Sara! Congrats on your win...enjoyed the read!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 3, 2012 at 8:42 AM Congratulations Sara xx

Joe Maverick July 29, 2012 at 1:19 PM Really really good one Sara; this is a write that touches my thoughts and senses, hope you are well yours Joe..)

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2012 at 6:42 PM REading this one again. It's quite philosophical, my friend!!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2012 at 5:36 PM Brilliant for the contest - and I like it very much - hope for a win for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne July 28, 2012 at 3:26 PM clever and beautiful sonnet, my friend

Justin Bordner July 28, 2012 at 10:34 AM I respect the word arrangements Sara - "tickles their fantasy leaves in quick spew" a vivid picture for my mind; induce thoughts of assuming accountability for my reactions & creations - thanks - J.A.B.

James Marshall Goff July 28, 2012 at 7:26 AM Sara....great title! And metaphors utilized in journey of life are brisk with salt air! Glad to hear Doris is getting some fresh air at home....will keep her in my prayers...jamesy

Nette Onclaud July 28, 2012 at 6:26 AM sweet melody playing on my mind, sara... i like the repetition of your phrase... this looks better than mine...winning huggs! :)

Joy Wellington July 27, 2012 at 11:26 PM Love the imagery here Sara, deep thoughts. Thanks for stopping by "It's All In The Jeans" Although I am the one who wrote it, I laugh everytime I read it...so funny! Blessings and one love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2012 at 11:33 AM a good way to do the ocean wave contest. I better get started on that one soon!!