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we made a pact he and i that wed be best friends til the day we died things got crazy and life sure changed he had the baby and i just managed to continue on with my life things got bad things got ugly my life took a turn for the worse but our pact still remains true til death unhurt do we have any better friends then the ones we had as kids i dont think so life was so simple and pure whyd it have to change i dont know but the pact still remains untouched unhurt unbroken

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Date: 10/4/2013 6:20:00 PM
Unbroken promise eternally, beautifully expressed, Brittany. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine. Might find some you like. Peace.
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Brittany Carroll
Date: 10/5/2013 11:22:00 AM
ty.im glad u thought so n i definitley will

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