Untouched

we made a pact he and i
that wed be best friends til the day we died
things got crazy and life sure changed
he had the baby and i just managed
to continue on with my life
things got bad things got ugly
my life took a turn for the worse
but our pact still remains
true til death
unhurt
do we have any better friends then the ones we had as kids
i dont think so
life was so simple and pure whyd it have to change
i dont know
but the pact still remains
untouched
unhurt
unbroken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Clemons Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Unbroken promise eternally, beautifully expressed, Brittany. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine. Might find some you like. Peace.
Carroll Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 11:22 AM
ty.im glad u thought so n i definitley will
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