Untold Story

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SHELLS sea shore ocean calls saunter listlessly temple chimes serenade emerald waves roll away "each shell hides an untold story" June 4, 2022 Followed format for Clarity Pyramid

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/7/2022 6:56:00 AM

Your poetry of the untold stories of the seashells has brought the sounds of the ocean and the waves to my minds. It was like putting the seashell up to my ear again. Eloquently written, Mala. Good luck in the contest. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Mark Frank

Date: 6/5/2022 10:40:00 AM

The joy of a sea shell. Brings back childhood memories. Greta write and well done!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/6/2022 5:41:00 AM

Dear Mark, truly appreciate your kind comment. You are right - shells bring back my childhood memories, too, from the seashores of Aleppi, India.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/5/2022 12:34:00 AM

Listening to a sea shell by putting it up to my ear was always such fun. I still enjoy doing it and teaching my grandchildren the joy of it. I love your poem Mala. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/6/2022 5:38:00 AM

Truly appreciate your beautiful comment, Connie. Your grandchildren are so lucky! Who can teach them how to thankfully enjoy the best things in life, than you?!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2022 4:08:00 PM

Hello Mala yes each shell does hide a story. Seashells are beautiful. Put one to your ear and you can hear the ocean. At least that is what I have ben told. Love & Friendship, Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2022 10:59:00 AM

Mala, you are great poetess. to. Friendship & Love. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/5/2022 6:40:00 AM

Hello Mala, thank you for the lovely comment. You are a great friend to. Love & Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/4/2022 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. You are a great poet, and the sweetest friend. Truly appreciate your comment. Love ~ Mala