Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Verse

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Untold Story

SHELLS
                                               sea shore
                                               ocean calls

                                           saunter listlessly
                                     temple chimes serenade 
                                     emerald waves roll away

                               "each shell hides an untold story"




                                            June 4, 2022
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Bill Baker June 7, 2022 at 6:56 AM Your poetry of the untold stories of the seashells has brought the sounds of the ocean and the waves to my minds. It was like putting the seashell up to my ear again. Eloquently written, Mala. Good luck in the contest. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Mark Frank June 5, 2022 at 10:40 AM The joy of a sea shell. Brings back childhood memories. Greta write and well done! Malabika Ray Choudhury June 6, 2022 at 5:41 AM Dear Mark, truly appreciate your kind comment. You are right - shells bring back my childhood memories, too, from the seashores of Aleppi, India.

Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2022 at 12:34 AM Listening to a sea shell by putting it up to my ear was always such fun. I still enjoy doing it and teaching my grandchildren the joy of it. I love your poem Mala. Blessings xxoo Malabika Ray Choudhury June 6, 2022 at 5:38 AM Truly appreciate your beautiful comment, Connie. Your grandchildren are so lucky! Who can teach them how to thankfully enjoy the best things in life, than you?!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2022 at 4:08 PM Hello Mala yes each shell does hide a story. Seashells are beautiful. Put one to your ear and you can hear the ocean. At least that is what I have ben told. Love & Friendship, Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu June 5, 2022 at 10:59 AM Mala, you are great poetess. to. Friendship & Love. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu June 5, 2022 at 6:40 AM Hello Mala, thank you for the lovely comment. You are a great friend to. Love & Friendship Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury June 4, 2022 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Darlene. You are a great poet, and the sweetest friend. Truly appreciate your comment. Love ~ Mala