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Untold Melody

Vibrant melodies
Searching for virgin ear drums
Lone mocking bird sings

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/17/2009

animalshappinessinspirationalmusicnaturehaiku

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Joseph Spence Sr

June 13, 2010 at 9:01 AM

Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

Adeleke Adeite

June 12, 2010 at 11:40 AM

Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke

Janette Fisher

June 9, 2010 at 11:15 AM

Many congrats on your wonderful haiku being featured this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 7, 2010 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Nathan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

June 7, 2010 at 3:55 AM

I can hear the call of the Mocking Bird from your closest tree....Great descriptiveness in this featured poem...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

June 6, 2010 at 6:29 PM

Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

L'Nass Shango

May 27, 2009 at 8:46 AM

This is not an experiment ... get out of here ... this is pure, raw genius ... exquisitely effectively perfect.

James Fraser

May 22, 2009 at 9:00 AM

This is a kool Haiku Nathan, James

Raul Moreno

May 20, 2009 at 2:38 AM

Love the entirety of this piece, nice flow with a nicely penned soundscape to top it off...Raul

Nathan Leccese

May 17, 2009 at 2:03 AM

I received a lot of good comments on my first ever Haiku, so I thought I would try it one more time at least.

Untold Melody

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