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Untold Melody

Vibrant melodies Searching for virgin ear drums Lone mocking bird sings Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 05/17/2009

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Date: 6/13/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 11:40:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:15:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful haiku being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Nathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:55:00 AM
I can hear the call of the Mocking Bird from your closest tree....Great descriptiveness in this featured poem...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:29:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/27/2009 8:46:00 AM
This is not an experiment ... get out of here ... this is pure, raw genius ... exquisitely effectively perfect.
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Date: 5/22/2009 9:00:00 AM
This is a kool Haiku Nathan, James
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Date: 5/20/2009 2:38:00 AM
Love the entirety of this piece, nice flow with a nicely penned soundscape to top it off...Raul
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:03:00 AM
I received a lot of good comments on my first ever Haiku, so I thought I would try it one more time at least.
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