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Untold

A desparate whisper
scuffles in the corner of
an unsteady tear
I miss the smell of your shirt
when hugs wiped away my fear
4/11/2017 Tanka contest

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Date: 4/15/2017 7:51:00 AM
Love your imagery, Lukas. Congrats on your win.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/15/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thx Agnes :)
Date: 4/14/2017 7:19:00 PM
wow, Lukas. A deep and sad one. Very nicely done. Congrats on the win.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/15/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 4/14/2017 3:17:00 PM
Excellent Lukas congrats!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/14/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/14/2017 10:43:00 AM
A fine write! Congrats!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/14/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thanks!

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