Untold

A desparate whisper
scuffles in the corner of
an unsteady tear
I miss the smell of your shirt
when hugs wiped away my fear
4/11/2017 Tanka contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krampe Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Love your imagery, Lukas. Congrats on your win.
Ficklin Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Thx Agnes :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 7:19 PM
wow, Lukas. A deep and sad one. Very nicely done. Congrats on the win.
Ficklin Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 10:26 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Capitano Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Excellent Lukas congrats!
Ficklin Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Thank you :)
Singh Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 10:43 AM
A fine write! Congrats!
Ficklin Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Thanks!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace