James Peranteau Poet Elegy

unto Yahweh call

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     Cast not to me the rose colored
                hearts poets blurt

          or thoughts of coolness
           from Appalachian falls

               or drinks that fog
                     mine mind

            Just fastened hands
                  bowed heads
                     and mawz
                         unto
                      Yahweh
                         call




*Uncle James will miss you Brandon !

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Izzy Gumbo August 8, 2009 at 9:33 AM Bravo! I pray so much I don't even do the head bowed with hands together anymore... it's more like a free flowing text message to God at this point! lol!! Hugs and many smiles on your delightful poetry my friend. I always enjoy reading you.

Charmaine Chircop August 8, 2009 at 8:38 AM This is sweet sad heartwrenching and it brought a teardrop to my eyes-Uncle James is a good man,friend,poet and im sure Brandon is proud of you and wishing to kiss your pain away--well penned James--charma

Christopher Higgins August 7, 2009 at 8:26 AM Superb writing my friend..I just love how this piece grabs me..wonderfully done and I can feel the pain.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 7, 2009 at 2:24 AM If Godly beliefs are true, and they are, Brandon is in a wonderful place. You will see him again and rejoice together. James Peranteau October 13, 2023 at 12:08 AM ty Dane :)