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You radiate my world,
maybe this is fate.
A destined event,
a beautiful beginning.
Words can describe
only so much.
Eyes so mysterious,
a book full of secrets
waiting to be unlocked.
Help me find the key.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 2:02 PM
Serenity this sounds like the start of a good story..David....PS..'In the beginning'
Madonsela Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 1:35 PM
simple beautiful. Just wonderful. RONNY *SMILES*
Madonsela Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 1:35 PM
simple beautiful. Just wonderful. RONNY *SMILES*
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