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Untitled Tanka

sleep overtakes quick
dreams incubate during night
their meanings elude
upon awakening and haunt
and wonder what mind perceived

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Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2011 at 10:02 PM

gosh, I kept searching around. I think I just may have read every single one of your poems. HOpe to see you posting more and more! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

August 10, 2010 at 11:47 PM

Yes, I think we all experience this!!

Sara Kendrick

June 15, 2010 at 11:01 AM

Interesting Tanka that you have penned...I found that you can take pad and pen next to your bed...Write in the pad saying that you are going to sleep and remember your dreams that are important for you to remember and you will remember..When you first wake up pad and pen remember dreams write them down..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

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