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Untitled Tanka

sleep overtakes quick dreams incubate during night their meanings elude upon awakening and haunt and wonder what mind perceived

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2011 10:02:00 PM

gosh, I kept searching around. I think I just may have read every single one of your poems. HOpe to see you posting more and more! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:47:00 PM

Yes, I think we all experience this!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/15/2010 11:01:00 AM

Interesting Tanka that you have penned...I found that you can take pad and pen next to your bed...Write in the pad saying that you are going to sleep and remember your dreams that are important for you to remember and you will remember..When you first wake up pad and pen remember dreams write them down..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara