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shadow follows us
everywhere so no escape
from our own darkness

introspectionhaiku

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Carol Fillmore

Date: 11/26/2019 5:34:00 AM

thank you Ritsuko! our darkness is with us always and we have to deal with it.

Rituko Shindo
Date: 11/27/2019 6:38:00 AM

You can have various views.You can see things different way.And you help me to remember important things.

Rituko Shindo

Date: 11/26/2019 4:38:00 AM

When I read this poem,I remembered the story of Peter Pan. Peter lost his shadow and Wendy sewed it to him. When I was a kid, I wondered why Peter was so frightened just about losing a shadow. Now I think yes,I must remember my darkness sometimes.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 7:11:00 PM

Just taking a look at your first post, excellent Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 11:49:00 PM

OOOH, the dark side. I end here with your first post. Loved reading all your chraming little poems. Luv, Andrea

Chris Smith

Date: 8/9/2010 11:07:00 PM

I like this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carol. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/9/2010 3:10:00 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2010 12:30:00 PM

Interesting and mysterious write..It's true that we have the darkness that would overtake us if we did not let the Holy Spirit be in control..Whichever light we feed the most controls us..Sara

Roger Page

Date: 6/14/2010 12:57:00 PM

Oh so true Regards Roger x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2010 10:04:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Constance La France

Date: 6/13/2010 8:36:00 AM

Whatever, haiku, Senryu, it is beautiful.. and welcome to the soup.. Constance

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/13/2010 8:03:00 AM

Excellent! Shadows are always with us. Our own goes with us everywhere. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Constance La France

Date: 6/13/2010 7:15:00 AM

I like this poem, very much, but may, I suggest that it is a Senryu, as a Haiku is of nature and Senryu is of human conditions, however, I think it is just wonderful, and rated it a 7... Constance