Untitled Haiku, Excited

untitled haiku, excited

nervous  shouts
we all rush and collide
hummingbird’s lost flight in a house

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(c) sally Young eslinger 1/19/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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January 16, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Hummingbirds need to be outside. Nice Haiku, Sally. Have a great day! Bill
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