Untitled As of Yet.....?

cheerful as the day is long
 
 dancing through the writhing throng

 the heady scent of faery fruit 

 enchanting melody of the lute

 salty tears of loathe and hate

              
 as they appear by the iron gate 

                       
 to drag you away

                       
but this time to stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 15, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Title sugestion. "Time to Stay" It seems to speak to me of insanity? If so the above title would have a nice double meaning. Light. Love & welcome!
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