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Level lands stretch far As my eyes can see; Stretching comprehension. Distant sights beguile My mind – Are they what they seem? Near to me is nothing- Beyond this place A dream? Breeze bluster’s the face Reminiscent of things real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 11:45:00 AM
Breeze is breeze on a hot day...whether real or made by a leaf blower. food for thought... Love the pensive poem!!
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:53:00 PM
NOw for ME this was the least abstact of the three I recently read. I LOVE this becuase it is lucid and AWESOME Imagery. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/11/2010 4:54:00 PM
Your last line is quite awesome David and bring the poem together nicely... hope all is going well with u know what... and reading between these lines.. makes me wonder if not? .. facebook me.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:39:00 PM
Enjoyed a little mystery, but a real one at that. Have yourself a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:05:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today David. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:10:00 PM
It is never easy to go beyond limits, but it does stretch the mind. It takes a certain amount of faith to brave the unknown. The only way to discover it is to start walking. Nice write, David. And thank you for your kind comment on my latest. All the best, Caroline.
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Date: 6/10/2010 8:20:00 PM
Yes maybe the physical things are as they seem. But many a spiritual journey, has caused me to long for things unseen. Thanks for your comment today. Smile, oh yes,the evil Sheriff of Nottingham, I shall not forget him. Agape, Moses
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