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Untitled - About the Question Why

why are you weeping

because I am a willow

must you remain so




(13 words)
23 May 2017

changemeaningfulselftreesenryu

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Darren White

May 23, 2017 at 7:35 AM

question not especially for this senryu: why do some of your poems start with "untitled?" The senryu made me smile, it is a sad humorous little poem. And is is a senku, or a hairyu.

Darren White

May 23, 2017 at 7:56 AM

Yes, it is, thank you.

J-Mag Guthrie

May 23, 2017 at 7:43 AM

There is no senku option in the drop-down list :( -- it does not have a title-- but if I called all my untitled poems simply "untitled" it would create confusion so I describe them in their thread titles. I think of it as the thread title rather than the poem title. Is that clearer?

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