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Love was carried with the wind,
A whisper to his lover’s ears.
You are made for me, the wind told me so,
You are made for me, as she listened for more.

Let me be your net if you should fall,
Take your hand while you stand tall.
Let me be your white knight,
Without speaking at all. 

Girl of my dreams, you’ve awakened my heart,
The sun shines brighter, now that I’ve witnessed your smile. 
Knowing that there is hope, I profess my love in as many ways,
Please listen to the wind before it fades away. 

For the wind carries a thousand kisses, 
Knowing why fate has placed you in my way.
And if love is not enough to carry you to me,
Know that my love will follow you home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/12/2016 7:53:00 AM
Good one... Rush....pd
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Date: 11/14/2016 4:49:00 PM
Not sure what that comment means but I am happy to have had you comment on both my poems. I have so many more to share but haven't as of yet. Knowing that people take the time to look and comment gives me the courage to publish even more. Thanks.
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