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Notice the air
How it changes with certain moments of the day
Sometimes you may feel it warm
Sometimes it'd be cold 
It may swipe you off your feet
It may bring you to the ground
Do you feel happy or sad
Does it whisper to cheer you up?
Do you get carried away by the wind?
Did you notice how the time has passed you by?
I was the air
I was the wind
I was the hope
I was the will
to move on!
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Agustin Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 11:45 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 22, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Purandhya Sharma, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 31, 2015 at 11:02 PM
PS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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