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'Please never let me go'
She felt the burning need to 
grab him by the hand nd hold 
on tight
She dd it anyway..
Not caring anymore about her 
sudden vulnerability ..
Ignoring the opening of her 
wounds ..
"Please hold me" she said
Her voice birthing heavy sobs 
as she tried to plead with him 
His arm already drenched in 
tears he jus looked at her..
Finali seeing her fears .. 
"Please never let me go"
Like a fetus abt to be aborted
She held on to dear life
A million thots rasing thru her 
mind
A shadow of doubt wrapping 
itself around her delicate 
frame 
Like a cold blanket
It made her shiver ..
Shiver hysterically as she 
begged him 

"Please never let me"
She whimpered like a 
motherless child in the arms of 
a stranger
Yearning for a saving grace .. 
A litte miracle .. Something to 
eat away the pain 

"Please never let me go" 
Her grip loosened as she 
spoke..
Her brown eyes now turning 
grey..
" Never" 
Was all he could say ...

Like full force cancer her body 
finally gave in ...
Who would have thot - 
''Thoughts'' could consume a 
person like that ..

"Please don't leave me"
HE said sobbing ..
As he held her limp body in his 
hands.. 
Its a sad story.. 
All every1 cud do was say 
"sorry"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/19/2013 5:42:00 PM
Hi Susan, A truly heartfelt write...Much emotion.. Ken..
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