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At this passing moment
None be 'round but I,
Slowly do they start to come,
Endlessly treking by.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 25, 2012 at 9:13 PM
Simple yet interesting. :)
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December 25, 2012 at 10:44 PM
Thanks, when I saw you had commented, it let me look and see I had left a "letter" out from a word, should be They and not tey. I think I wrote it at a gathering, and I was there early and then folk started to arrive. Happy New Year
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