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Who are we but players
that in the end
when hunted
will not blame the bullet
that drove too quickly
but rather focus
on the brightest points
in this unending game.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 18, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 2:21 PM
Ethan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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