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Tears so warm and bitter, pain so hurtful and mode. "I wish I 
cannot feel this again." I can't take this anymore I want to 
smile, not cry all my tears. You left me with a paralyze 
heart, you left without saying thank you. "I couldn't been 
that bad." I was sweet.gently.loving and more I showed you 
smiles and laugher, even when I was blue with no strength to 
carry on. I was your "superwoman the healer"!!!! you was the 
gun and those sour meanful words. pop, pop careless man you 
where. But love was my good heart I gave you, happy or sad 
I was but my man I loved. Little but something I gave to 
you, even my last dime but you was worth more and a 
million. So many I love you and forever always we will be I 
believed that. And still do, I gave you the power I showered 
you with everything I was the one. Who seen it all but still 
was by your side, your actions games I was here not there. 
Right near so clear in view but you broke me and the rules. 
Now it me crumbling and you far far away, probable not least 
caring what you had done to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Evette Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Beautiful pain in this piece. Reminds me of something a teacher once told me, "Don't give all your cookies away. You gotta save some for yourself." I understood what he meant but it really hit home after my heart had been broken and I had nothing left for me to help me put myself back together. Love this Monica
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September 12, 2010 at 5:18 PM
a deep write, enjoyed reading this one today...P.D.
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