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I'm not the woman for your silent happiness! And you already know............. Some preacher damned me and i'm crucified, black crows are digging in my soul. I know your anger,i'm the sacrifice so take a charcoal from my heart and draw me naked on our bedroom's wall than throw your knife and cut me deeper 'cause i won't breathe for you no more!
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September 15, 2026 at 7:27 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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February 7, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Elina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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September 12, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Elina,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
Dimitrova Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Linda-Marie!However i don't think i'm very good at writing in english,it's hard for me because i'm bulgarian.But i just wrote this one in english i don't know why?!I'm using english in facebook ,i usually write in bulgarian but i'm not a good translator and i'm afraid that my poems will loose their scence if i translate it ...Anyway thank you for your advice,i'm nwe here!I'll think about a title!:)
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write tonight however u neglected to title this poem and readers will not be able to access it to read and comment.. luv..
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:09 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elina. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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