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And more than anything
I seek to rain to 
Elevate this fear I have—
Into an electricity that
Becomes so hostile that it
Must vacate this body.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Goff Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:33 PM
am laughing (with joy!) at this creativity! thanks for the joy! Ian! jamesy
Jenkins Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Powerful... must vacate this body... WOW
Mcclaran Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:26 AM
i love minimalistic eloquence. nice job.
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