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Like intense bone rattling thunder in a perfect storm, my tidal waves crash upon your integument shores. Jared Pickett 3/23/2010 Asavvy1

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/28/2010 12:35:00 AM

Too many said in few words.powerful.... wonderful..Charma.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2010 8:50:00 AM

The reader can feel the power of nature in this awesome poem, Jared. Very good work -- concise and compelling. Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/26/2010 7:04:00 PM

Nicely said.Hope all is well with you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2010 11:54:00 AM

Interesting thoughts that have been penned here. Sara

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/26/2010 10:24:00 AM

A lot of content in a few words, thanks for your visit today have a great weekend Daniel

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/26/2010 9:59:00 AM

Thanks fo the comment today. hope you are well.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2010 7:22:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jared. Thank you for sharing it. It has been a while. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/23/2010 9:47:00 PM

"Bone rattling thunder"....great imagery, Jared...maybe a perfect storm is raging..Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/23/2010 4:37:00 PM

intense!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2010 4:29:00 PM

Well how about "Merging" or "Intensified" or "Connection" or "Enmeshed" or "Thunder" or "Explosion" or "Volatile" ... your two lines signify all of the above titles for your Untitled ... great ...luv.. .."Sweetheart" ... I just posted a new blog ...hope u will comment on it tonight..