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Like intense bone rattling thunder in a perfect storm,
my tidal waves crash upon your integument shores.

Jared Pickett
3/23/2010
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Charmaine Chircop

March 28, 2010 at 12:35 AM

Too many said in few words.powerful.... wonderful..Charma.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 27, 2010 at 8:50 AM

The reader can feel the power of nature in this awesome poem, Jared. Very good work -- concise and compelling. Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

March 26, 2010 at 7:04 PM

Nicely said.Hope all is well with you.

Sara Kendrick

March 26, 2010 at 11:54 AM

Interesting thoughts that have been penned here. Sara

Daniel Cheeseman

March 26, 2010 at 10:24 AM

A lot of content in a few words, thanks for your visit today have a great weekend Daniel

Doris Culverhouse

March 26, 2010 at 9:59 AM

Thanks fo the comment today. hope you are well.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 24, 2010 at 7:22 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jared. Thank you for sharing it. It has been a while. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

March 23, 2010 at 9:47 PM

"Bone rattling thunder"....great imagery, Jared...maybe a perfect storm is raging..Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

March 23, 2010 at 4:37 PM

intense!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 23, 2010 at 4:29 PM

Well how about "Merging" or "Intensified" or "Connection" or "Enmeshed" or "Thunder" or "Explosion" or "Volatile" ... your two lines signify all of the above titles for your Untitled ... great ...luv.. .."Sweetheart" ... I just posted a new blog ...hope u will comment on it tonight..

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