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Canopy of waves Frozen water on the edge I dream I'm a bird

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 12:05:00 PM
Can I join this dreamy flight..chilling but good imagery. SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:14:00 AM
just dropping by to say hi. haven't seen you post in the last few days. Hope you are ok!
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Date: 3/12/2013 1:18:00 PM
I like how you don't title your haiku, for the haiku should speak for itself, in my opinion. I think we all dream to be a bird now and then... thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/26/2013 5:08:00 PM
My favorite of all. I love the imagery of this one.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! And have a great wednesday
Date: 2/26/2013 9:59:00 AM
I can picture this Jeremy
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:03:00 PM
I'm glad you can, that means a lot to me, thanks Charmaine!
Date: 2/26/2013 2:04:00 AM
jeremy great image...David
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM
Thanks, David!
Date: 2/25/2013 9:15:00 PM
love the haiku imagery. hope your lovely wings are not cold... enjoyed...PD
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:00:00 PM
My wings are warm :)