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Canopy of waves 
Frozen water on the edge  
I dream I'm a bird

oceanhaiku

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Skat A

March 29, 2013 at 12:05 PM

Can I join this dreamy flight..chilling but good imagery. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2013 at 1:14 AM

just dropping by to say hi. haven't seen you post in the last few days. Hope you are ok!

Timothy Hicks

March 12, 2013 at 1:18 PM

I like how you don't title your haiku, for the haiku should speak for itself, in my opinion. I think we all dream to be a bird now and then... thanks for sharing.