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Canopy of waves Frozen water on the edge I dream I'm a bird

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Skat A

Date: 3/29/2013 12:05:00 PM

Can I join this dreamy flight..chilling but good imagery. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2013 1:14:00 AM

just dropping by to say hi. haven't seen you post in the last few days. Hope you are ok!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2013 1:18:00 PM

I like how you don't title your haiku, for the haiku should speak for itself, in my opinion. I think we all dream to be a bird now and then... thanks for sharing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 5:08:00 PM

My favorite of all. I love the imagery of this one.

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! And have a great wednesday

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/26/2013 9:59:00 AM

I can picture this Jeremy

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:03:00 PM

I'm glad you can, that means a lot to me, thanks Charmaine!

David Williams

Date: 2/26/2013 2:04:00 AM

jeremy great image...David

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:01:00 PM

Thanks, David!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2013 9:15:00 PM

love the haiku imagery. hope your lovely wings are not cold... enjoyed...PD

Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/27/2013 2:00:00 PM

My wings are warm :)