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It crashes inside me,

It beats my soul,

This wave of emptiness.

 

It whispers to me,

It haunts my dreams,

This feeling of loneliness.

 

It causes me to panic,

It makes my heart race,

This dread of being forgotten

 

It brings tears to my eyes,

It hovers, like regret, in the ar,

This time of saying goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 23, 2012 at 11:05 AM
The feeling of loneliness/emptiness described very well here. All your dark poems are brilliantly written...I love this poem 'cause I feel this way sometimes....Like now!!! Anyway a great write once again queen of darkness!! Enjoyed...
Breidenthal Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 1:07 PM
I meant empty and Forgotten... hahah
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February 5, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Nicely written! Is this the other part of Lost and Forgotten? - David
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December 21, 2011 at 5:33 PM
You shall never be forgotten dear one! Alright, that was quite awkward of me tah say but whatever.... Excellent verse yah got here! Always, Laura
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