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intrusive elements enwrap me nauseating wholesomeness will you retrench my dreary blitheness contortion ?


(Weekly Magnetic Poetry Challenge • July 6–12, 2026)

intrusive elements enwrap me 
Nauseating wholesomeness
will you retrench my dreary bicoloured contortion ?
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July 12, 2026 at 12:02 PM
Raki, it's cool how you twisted “nauseating wholesomeness” with “dreary bicoloured contortion”, it paints this intense, tangled vibe that stuck with me. Feels deep and raw, in the best way. "guilt is like the old books" Can we steal that? LOL
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July 12, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Yes you can LOL Thank you so much for your kind words.
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