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1424 HAIKU
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 
Contest Judged:  11/10/2025 6:13:00 AM
( 8th Place )

Written: November 8, 2025


footsteps in the snow
stop at the edge of the porch
you turned away first
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Somadas Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:00 PM
captures a frozen moment of parting.. Congrats on you palcement Rowena..
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Thank you!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:22 PM
left me breathless, like a snowy morning. well done!
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much!
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