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equinox mystique
stifles summer’s ardor . . .
bright hues all a ruse
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Kerr Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:55 AM
Andrea, This haiku is the very essence of originality and mysterious imaging. Simply superb. Your description of Determinant pleased me. Thanks for that Howard
Steele Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Your haiku is playful and serene, Andrea. Congratulations.
May Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Nicely done Andrea, Soupmail
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Creative work. Way to go. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 8:48 PM
How deep is your depth, it stealeth my breathe.
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:38 PM
lovely ~ well penned
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:26 PM
nicely penned for the contest...leaves as a 'ruse' is priceless
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Gorgeous- Andrea, I love this concept, how leaves are a "ruse"
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 2:16 PM
Thanks so much
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