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8/28/2025 for 1407 Untitled Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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coyote pack howl
stops as quick as it started 
one fewer rabbit

animalhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2025 4:27:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 9/2/2025 9:54:00 AM

Thanks, Sara!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/30/2025 3:56:00 PM

Congrats, David ~

David Crandall
Date: 8/31/2025 5:37:00 PM

Thanks, Line!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/30/2025 11:21:00 AM

Wile E. got one huh (lol) Good one, David. Congratulations on your winning placement! Charle

David Crandall
Date: 8/31/2025 5:37:00 PM

Thanks, Charles - yup, once in a while, Wile Es got to win. Where I live, these coyotes fill up their shopping bags with these little guys.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/29/2025 5:26:00 PM

oh no! and I love rabbits...best wishes with the contest

David Crandall
Date: 8/31/2025 5:37:00 PM

haha, sorry, I don't know what I was thinking to sacrifice a rabbit for this poem.

David Crandall
Date: 8/31/2025 5:33:00 PM

haha, sorry, I don't know what I was thinking to sacrifice a rabbit for this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2025 12:33:00 AM

- Poor rabbit ... a great one, David :) - Best wishes in contest :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 8/29/2025 10:14:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise!

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