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Winter, wait! Only walls separate us My shelter needs time Flowers breathe whats left Love will wither, petals fall Spring waits, hearts endure Passing clouds hide me Flautist predict Celtic joy Percussions need strength

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/30/2009 6:04:00 PM

Indeed we are never really ready for the winter season. We need the content within to help us through to, in fact, not let love wither, but find a renewal when Spring comes. I am a little intrigued with the last 2 lines. I sense a soul that doesn't give up, but needs strength? Why Celtic joy? Care to explain? I enjoyed this thought provoking read. Thanks for sharing and for your comments on my poem, "the Four Seasons". Your reviews are much appreciated, Jimbo. Warm regards, Caroline.

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/25/2009 6:37:00 PM

Great work Jimbo, excellent choka...Raul

James Peranteau

Date: 8/25/2009 6:30:00 PM

Whatever its being called Mr. Goff,..it has ,..your poetry, a dashing sense of grandure to it ! I love this write ! Inspire me, inspire me,..you have filled me with poetic joy ! TY james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/24/2009 9:11:00 AM

Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara