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Weeping Willows droop, swaying umbrella's umbra, whispering trees stoop.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/7/2023 6:45:00 AM

Very nicely penned, Thomas. It's good to see your Haiku's given coverage on the featured poems pages. Best wishes, Brian

Anil Deo

Date: 5/6/2020 9:20:00 AM

Is it the Spring rain, or Winter's last guffaw? Liked the alliteration (not common in haiku). Love willows myself, the source of ASPIRIN, I recall ??

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/6/2020 5:57:00 AM

Love that second line! Love it!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/5/2020 11:14:00 PM

Quite beautiful, Thomas. Well done! ;)

Thomas Wells
Date: 5/5/2020 11:37:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, Thank you so much! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2020 5:32:00 PM

lovely haiku Thomas I adore weeping willows:-) hugs Jan xx

Thomas Wells
Date: 5/5/2020 9:53:00 PM

Hi Jan, I love them both also. I guess I should post more of it and check out what folks like you write. :-) Thank you so much! Always stay safe. xx hugs Thomas