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Weeping Willows droop,

swaying umbrella's umbra,

whispering trees stoop.
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Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Very nicely penned, Thomas. It's good to see your Haiku's given coverage on the featured poems pages. Best wishes, Brian
Deo Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Is it the Spring rain, or Winter's last guffaw? Liked the alliteration (not common in haiku). Love willows myself, the source of ASPIRIN, I recall ??
Krutsinger Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 5:57 AM
Love that second line! Love it!
Buehler Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Quite beautiful, Thomas. Well done! ;)
Wells Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Hello Evelyn, Thank you so much! :-)
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 5:32 PM
lovely haiku Thomas I adore weeping willows:-) hugs Jan xx
Wells Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:53 PM
Hi Jan, I love them both also. I guess I should post more of it and check out what folks like you write. :-) Thank you so much! Always stay safe. xx hugs Thomas
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