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Weeping Willows droop, swaying umbrella's umbra, whispering trees stoop.

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Date: 5/6/2020 9:20:00 AM
Is it the Spring rain, or Winter's last guffaw? Liked the alliteration (not common in haiku). Love willows myself, the source of ASPIRIN, I recall ??
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Date: 5/6/2020 5:57:00 AM
Love that second line! Love it!
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Date: 5/5/2020 11:14:00 PM
Quite beautiful, Thomas. Well done! ;)
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Thomas Wells
Date: 5/5/2020 11:37:00 PM
Hello Evelyn, Thank you so much! :-)
Date: 5/5/2020 5:32:00 PM
lovely haiku Thomas I adore weeping willows:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2020 9:53:00 PM
Hi Jan, I love them both also. I guess I should post more of it and check out what folks like you write. :-) Thank you so much! Always stay safe. xx hugs Thomas