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THE HUG FELT SO WELCOMING.HOW LONG CAN YOU STAY?
SPREADING YOURSELF THIN IS THE BIGGEST GIVE AWAY.
YOUR CELL PHONE IS RINGING OFF THE HOOK.SMILING 
AND GRINNING STATING THAT YOU'RE SINGLE. I KNOW
YOUR HISTORY . THE PLATE OF EXCUSES YOU CONTINUE 
TO SERVE ME. THEN YOU OFFERED ME A DRINK OF FALSE
ALIBIES.TRIFLING IS WHAT I CALL IT. ONLY A COWARD
ACTS LIKES THIS. TRUTH ALWAYS SUFACE TO THE TOP.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 2:39 PM
I like the tone and the content ..yet I'm having trouble because of the "enjambment"?? where you're breaking the line? Light & Love
Duhart Avatar
July 8, 2008 at 10:10 PM
Sounds like "A Taste of Deception" to me. Great write and continue to share.
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