~*~untitled~*~

It was a cool afternoon when I went to see you.
when I got to your door, the sky was still blue.
no rain in sight that I could see.
I rung your bell and there you were waiting for me.
we were on the couch watching t.v.
that when I noticed you were looking at me.
you kissed my forehead and then my lips.
you looked at me then grabbed my hips.
you picked me up the sat me on you.
I could see how in love I was with you.
then things got interesting and we went to your room.
the I wasn't in gloom.
we laid on your bed then started to kiss. 
never thought it would have ended at this.
you said you love me and I said I loved you too.
I guess you could tell what I felt for you.
I hope you'll feel the same way if I choose to say no.
or if I let you do it, would you think I'm a hoe?
if anything does happen its cause I feel your love.
I hope you'll love me forever and always and all of the above.
tu quiere un chi chi
y te lo dare
si tu me promete
que siempre me amare.
I'll love you for always and hope you feel the same.
and hope your love for me will always remain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005


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