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The window seems to show outdoors so nice, Forever keeping wilderness at bay. The floating seeds assail the crystal pane, They try and bring us back, but no, we stay!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/18/2009 9:55:00 AM
Another form thats new to me ... had to read this a couple of times and the imagery flies out ... I have lots of little birds that visit my patio and like to fling the birdseed around and then they always fly away ... smile ... Wonderful writing!
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Date: 10/28/2008 3:08:00 PM
I really love all of your work
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