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In a drifted breeze — we parachute a misted fog enveloped cutting deep words tripped up lost mementos moving on with or without me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 1:11 PM
I feel sadness here. Beautiful Tim.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:28 PM
An untitled poem ... very intriguing, Tim! This poetic beaut caught my eye for sure. Ty for taking us on a para-sail flight. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy.
Hopper Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:23 AM
So effortless and beautiful!
Vaso Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 2:25 AM
Oh so very deep, and I might guess historic!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Helloe Tim, here is another hug from me. Have a nice evening my friend.
Downing  Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Awe, sad on Tim... sending a warm hug :)
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:14 PM
- - - ..... - - - ... hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 2:49 PM
tender and melancholy, tim... good one!.. huggs
Sands Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Deeply sad Tim. Well written expression of feelings!
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 1:35 PM
beautiful but sad imagery Tim hugs jan xx
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