Untitled 05012016

UNTITLED 05012016
The ego is destroying the world of understanding
People tend to care about only themselves and lamenting
They blame others for their weakness and shortcoming
Still, we have distinguish between defending and offending
Tr?n Minh Hi?n Hien Tran Orlando May 1, 2016
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Whatley Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:20 AM
It's tragic, and very truthful, Hein. Only by surpassing ourselves, can our society surpass its corruption.
Palli Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 11:09 AM
So true! Well expressed!
Jennings Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 10:56 AM
The ego is a questionable foe ... Ourselves and our souls, must be conquered before entering heaven, so I believe. Before entrance to Elysium, we must become as God is, or The Source or whomever one has labeled it.... She/He/It.... is the greater of all intent and we must die to our egos, to allow heaven in heaven and not on Earth... Very deep poem friend. I love poems that make us think...
Whatley Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Well said, Bonnie!
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