whispers of spring
lilacs in the misty morning
their sweet perfume fills the air
cut blooms in vases
Came across a new poetry form earlier today, Naani. The form is Telagu (India), 4
lines, between 20-24 syllables in total and is often about human relations or current
statements (events? ... this part wasn't clear). This poem was inspired in part by a
friend (first two lines), Christine Amaryllis Haskell...without her, the poem might not
have come together:) Thanks my BFF!
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