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Untimely Death

It came to me that night to take me to its home But indeed it appeared just a little too late For when it showed up, I had already packed and gone And I had previously arrived at its place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/13/2009 11:00:00 PM
Interesting write, Lakisha, nice to meet u and have u read my poetry too.. please post moe for us to share... thankxxx for your comments... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:38:00 AM
LOL good for you..make that banshee work! Light & Love
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Date: 5/23/2009 3:22:00 PM
Interesting write here, Lakisha. It has been a long time since you have posted here at the Soup. You are a fine writer and I hope you return soon with more for us to enjoy!!
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:26:00 PM
Interesting write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:28:00 AM
Nice work and congratulations on your poem being featured.
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:38:00 AM
Nice work Lakisha and congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:48:00 PM
Much to think about in just four lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:09:00 PM
Congradulations on being featured this week.-looking forward to reading more of your poems...-Rhonda Kay
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations On Your Poem Being Featured This Week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week. Hoping to see some more postings. Ernilando
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2008 4:30:00 PM
Hi lakisha, great introspection nice write, take care D-nyce
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