Inkstain Thepoet Poet Quatrain

Untimely Death

It came to me that night to take me to its home
But indeed it appeared just a little too late
For when it showed up, I had already packed and gone
And I had previously arrived at its place

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 13, 2009 at 11:00 PM Interesting write, Lakisha, nice to meet u and have u read my poetry too.. please post moe for us to share... thankxxx for your comments... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi October 21, 2009 at 9:38 AM LOL good for you..make that banshee work! Light & Love

Sue Mason May 23, 2009 at 3:22 PM Interesting write here, Lakisha. It has been a long time since you have posted here at the Soup. You are a fine writer and I hope you return soon with more for us to enjoy!!

Laura Mckenzie April 17, 2009 at 2:26 PM Interesting write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Anthony Nutter April 17, 2009 at 3:28 AM Nice work and congratulations on your poem being featured.

Raul Moreno April 15, 2009 at 10:38 AM Nice work Lakisha and congrats on your feature this week...Raul

April 13, 2009 at 3:48 PM Much to think about in just four lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson April 13, 2009 at 2:09 PM Congradulations on being featured this week.-looking forward to reading more of your poems...-Rhonda Kay

Anthony Nutter April 13, 2009 at 12:17 PM Congratulations On Your Poem Being Featured This Week.

Ernilando Tugaff April 13, 2009 at 11:43 AM Congratulations on your featured write this week. Hoping to see some more postings. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2009 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol

Deneen White August 24, 2008 at 4:30 PM Hi lakisha, great introspection nice write, take care D-nyce