Untill Daybreak Do Us Apart

The stars!
So light!
So bright!
Oh, how it paints the night!

The moon!
So round!
So sound!
For it glows this life i've found!

This Night!
So dark!
So marked,
Upon my newly found heart.

To wish night could restart,
Untill daybreak do us apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 12:47 PM
**Oh,How it paints the night** Terrifs!
Rhinem Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 8:09 PM
....I would love to stand there with You within this moment; just to see "Your Beautiful Smile!!!:):) Wonderful write Catherine! Your wonderful words from "Your Precious Heart & Soul," never fail to touch or move my own!!!:):)~"My Love To You Always, And All You Love, John!!!"~ Sweet Dreams Dear Lady!!!:):)
Rhinem Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 8:05 PM
Smile~"Hello Beautiful & Gifted Catherine Adams!!!"~I truly and sincerely hope that "Your Precious Heart" is doing wonderfully tonight dear lady!!!?:):) What a very beautiful write here~filled with such soft and lovely thoughts and images!!! Smile~"Your New Heart Found"~What A Treasure I Would Say~ Your Beautiful Heart That Is!!!:):)....cont....
Goff Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 5:39 AM
lotsa joy! love it, Catherine! Jim
Winter Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 5:12 AM
Someone had a great night! Wow, this is truly beautiful. Nice work. Love, Shar
Faulkner Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 9:29 PM
love this peace. lovely painted
Townsend Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 7:00 PM
"Oh, how it paints the night" is a beautiful line. Loving and touching. Smiles from Lolita
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