Untill Daybreak Do Us Apart

The stars!
So light!
So bright!
Oh, how it paints the night!

The moon!
So round!
So sound!
For it glows this life i've found!

This Night!
So dark!
So marked,
Upon my newly found heart.

To wish night could restart,
Untill daybreak do us apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/18/2009 12:47:00 PM
**Oh,How it paints the night** Terrifs!
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:09:00 PM
....I would love to stand there with You within this moment; just to see "Your Beautiful Smile!!!:):) Wonderful write Catherine! Your wonderful words from "Your Precious Heart & Soul," never fail to touch or move my own!!!:):)~"My Love To You Always, And All You Love, John!!!"~ Sweet Dreams Dear Lady!!!:):)
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:05:00 PM
Smile~"Hello Beautiful & Gifted Catherine Adams!!!"~I truly and sincerely hope that "Your Precious Heart" is doing wonderfully tonight dear lady!!!?:):) What a very beautiful write here~filled with such soft and lovely thoughts and images!!! Smile~"Your New Heart Found"~What A Treasure I Would Say~ Your Beautiful Heart That Is!!!:):)....cont....
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Date: 3/18/2009 5:39:00 AM
lotsa joy! love it, Catherine! Jim
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Date: 3/18/2009 5:12:00 AM
Someone had a great night! Wow, this is truly beautiful. Nice work. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/17/2009 9:29:00 PM
love this peace. lovely painted
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:00:00 PM
"Oh, how it paints the night" is a beautiful line. Loving and touching. Smiles from Lolita
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