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Until You Become My Wife

Until you become my wife....... How can I tell you about my love on you Its difficult to explain anyone to understand Do you know how much you mean to me Without you my heart gets sore and pain My love never dies for you and you are mine I will be here for you to bring happiness always When ever I talk to you I feel so alive and real and yet to see a person like you as true love Your patience with me has been so great and never expecting anything in return I have dreams on you that store in my heart Hopefully, those dreams will bring life between us Then I will make our home with beautiful one I promise you I will not break your heart and go away I will spend rest of my life with your love and care I could feel this loved until you become my wife Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved 2014

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Date: 8/18/2014 8:10:00 PM
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it is always nice to hear from you..LINDA
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/4/2014 10:30:00 PM
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This is just beautiful Ravi. It is very romantic. There should be more men like you. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/5/2014 5:45:00 AM
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Margaret Franceschini
Date: 8/4/2014 7:50:00 PM
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Ravi: almost like a prayer, you poured out your heart and Heaven heard. She is on her way to you. Your promises are sincere.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/5/2014 5:44:00 AM
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/31/2014 1:30:00 AM
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These beautiful words are so honest and heartfelt. A nice write, Ravi! I hope your dreams come true.....
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/4/2014 12:48:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:35:00 PM
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Ravi, I hope your dreams come true. This is a sweet, heartfelt poem... Always a delight to hear from you..Linda
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Date: 8/4/2014 12:48:00 AM
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/27/2014 5:31:00 PM
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You have to tell me one day if this splendid woman ever became your wife, Ravi. You are such a romantic.
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Date: 8/4/2014 12:48:00 AM
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2014 7:29:00 AM
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Ahh!! Romantic..I hope that the lady of your affection enjoys what you have written for and about her..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2014 12:48:00 AM
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/27/2014 5:08:00 AM
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- How a flower need sun and water to be flower, so need a man the love of being human. - Beautifully written, Ravi! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/4/2014 12:49:00 AM
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Thanks for your comment Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses xxxx

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