Until You Become My Wife

Until you become my wife.......

How can I tell you about my love on you
Its difficult to explain anyone to understand
Do you know how much you mean to me
Without you my heart gets sore and pain
My love never dies for you and you are mine
I will be here for you to bring happiness always
When ever I talk to you I feel so alive and real
and yet to see a person like you as true love
Your patience with me has been so great
and never expecting anything in return
I have dreams on you that store in my heart
Hopefully, those dreams will bring life between us
Then I will make our home with beautiful one
I promise you I will not break your heart and go away
I will spend rest of my life with your love and care
I could feel this loved until you become my wife 

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 8:10 PM
it is always nice to hear from you..LINDA
Carrillo Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 10:30 PM
This is just beautiful Ravi. It is very romantic. There should be more men like you. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Sathasivam Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Franceschini Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 7:50 PM
Ravi: almost like a prayer, you poured out your heart and Heaven heard. She is on her way to you. Your promises are sincere.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated
Deschler Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:30 AM
These beautiful words are so honest and heartfelt. A nice write, Ravi! I hope your dreams come true.....
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
A   Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Ravi, I hope your dreams come true. This is a sweet, heartfelt poem... Always a delight to hear from you..Linda
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:31 PM
You have to tell me one day if this splendid woman ever became your wife, Ravi. You are such a romantic.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Ahh!! Romantic..I hope that the lady of your affection enjoys what you have written for and about her..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:48 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 5:08 AM
- How a flower need sun and water to be flower, so need a man the love of being human. - Beautifully written, Ravi! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Thanks for your comment Anne. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses xxxx
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