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10/09/24

Pick a title Vol. 46

Third Place

Contest by Edward Ibeh

UNTIL THEN

     Enjoying bright colourful vibrant youth
     feeling free frolic, car of life to steer.
      Self-love as Narcissus : Absolute truth !
      Until then I have not met you , Oh, Dear !

      Until then my life ran smooth , no worry.
      Now only target , how to win your heart.
      Most alluring turning our love story.
      No repose, come close, don't let me apart.
 
      Staying happy felt no urge for amour
      Until then found your charismatic charm.
      Now drinking desires in fervent fervour.
      To get you as better-half , got alarm.

     Dear, not possible to live without you.
     Valentine ! Be mine in bliss or in rue.
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October 17, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Beautifully composed sonnet, Anisha. I enjoyed it very much. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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