FJ Thomas Poet Kyrielle

Until Then

When her smiles are no longer real
And she laughs only now and then
If every thought is now kept sealed
Hold her until she feels again

When memories only bring tears
And joy's lost in "remember when"
In the darkness quiet her fears
Hold her until she feels again 

A heart scarred and of love bereft
Empty voids her only spokesmen 
When she says numb is all that's left 
Hold her until she feels again


05/12/2018

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Joe Maverick November 11, 2021 at 4:01 PM Holding on F J, it's all we can do sometimes And sometimes it's enough to help and heal' Quite a lot to think on here'

Heidi Sands January 6, 2021 at 8:41 AM Well written and expressed. Great poem :) FJ Thomas January 6, 2021 at 4:15 PM Thanks so much Heidi :)

James Inman July 21, 2018 at 3:18 AM A touching write. FJ Thomas July 21, 2018 at 3:48 PM Thank you again James ;)

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2018 at 9:44 PM The feeling captured and well-expressed, FJ. Although it was Dr. Manette, to whom this applied, Lucy being his comforter, this did remind me of their relationship in Dickens' classic work, "Tale of Two Cities." :) gw FJ Thomas July 13, 2018 at 6:25 PM I had not considered that; I remember her having more life to her. But for some reason Dickens isn't a story that stayed with me like others. You make me want to revisit it :) Thanks GW

Al Juman July 9, 2018 at 3:24 PM very nicely composed excellent FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 3:47 PM Thank you very much Al :)

Robert Lindley June 10, 2018 at 7:31 AM Surely must be the pit of despair to have lost the joy of living. This dark world does bring some to that horrible state.. Your beautiful refrain says so very much! A fav my friend.. FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 12:46 PM I have met some women who have truly been through a great deal. To the point of simply not feeling anymore. Thank you so much Robert.

John Hamilton June 6, 2018 at 9:51 AM Wow FJ, I am becoming a true fan, this is my kind of poetry, filled with compassion and kindness, a stirring write and has to be a fave! FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 12:45 PM That has given me a much-needed smile John. Thank you so much and please forgive me for the delayed response.

Line Gauthier June 2, 2018 at 6:59 PM Congrats, FJ. A lovely and haunting poem. FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 12:44 PM Hi Line. Thank you

Connie Marcum Wong June 1, 2018 at 4:13 AM I relate this poem to my best friend who can no longer remember me. I have a lump in my throat after reading this beautifully written poem Flo. Your words touched my heart! Thank you. This beauty if going into my faves! xxoo : ) FJ Thomas June 1, 2018 at 7:33 AM That must be so very hard; I cannot imagine. Thank you for such a heartfelt comment Connie. It means a lot to me.

Honestly J.T. May 27, 2018 at 11:39 PM Nice; this would be one of poems written because you can't speak it out -JT FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 6:57 PM Yes it could be :) Thank you James.

Tom Cunningham May 16, 2018 at 2:08 AM Congratulations FJ, Tom. FJ Thomas May 16, 2018 at 6:39 AM Thanks Tom!

Joseph May May 15, 2018 at 9:13 PM A loving hug to ease the pain....Congrats on your win Flo FJ Thomas May 16, 2018 at 6:39 AM Good morning Joseph. Yes that is it :) Thank you

Juliet Ligon May 15, 2018 at 2:01 PM What patience and love it must take to endure one who is unfeeling and have hope to revive them back to life through love. This poem touched me. I love the refrain. FJ Thomas May 15, 2018 at 2:31 PM I'm happy it touched you Juliet :) In many cases it is the person/people around them who have made them that way. So whether they've changed and try and fix what they've broken or whether the other person tries to fix themselves it's good either way :)

Susan Gentry May 15, 2018 at 2:28 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done. A lot of wisdom here. FJ Thomas May 15, 2018 at 10:18 AM Thanks so much Susan. I appreciate the time you give to other's writings.

Rob Carmack May 15, 2018 at 12:31 AM Flo, I am glad to read below you have been able to move beyond this. Your generous heart was missed here when you were gone. Congrats and thank you for your entry. FJ Thomas May 15, 2018 at 10:17 AM It makes my heart smile to hear I was thought of. Thank you very much for that Rob :)

Paul Callus May 14, 2018 at 4:31 PM There are many people who for various reasons have lost the joy of living. Sometimes all they need is understanding, or a kind word accompanied by a warm hug. Your poem speaks to those who are in such a position, Flo. ~ Warm regards // paul FJ Thomas May 15, 2018 at 10:15 AM Good morning Paul. Yes you are very right; and I hope each gets what they need. Thank you Paul :)

Kelly Deschler May 13, 2018 at 8:01 PM So beautifully expressive and I love the rhyme ... Very well penned, FJ! FJ Thomas May 13, 2018 at 11:04 PM Hey Kelly :) thank you very much!

Daniel Turner May 13, 2018 at 11:54 AM So sad, Flo. My goodness. I hope this is just your talent and not your life. Happy Mother's Day. I pray you will find love and laughter soon! FJ Thomas May 13, 2018 at 3:34 PM Once it was; I have since found strength Daniel. But I remember how empty I felt, numb; and I don't want anyone else out there to think no one understands that feeling. Sometimes it won't be another person that helps them find there way up, it will be their own self. Thank you so much Daniel.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 13, 2018 at 12:17 AM You are showing upon you readers Love and compassion in profusion! A well penned lovely poem soothing the heart! A joy to read once again your write dear FJ Thomas. Stay bright and blessed. FJ Thomas May 13, 2018 at 3:30 PM Thank you very much dear Besma :)

Susan Ashley May 12, 2018 at 11:38 PM Fj, you spill poignant ink beautifully in this breathtaking poem. An intimate portrait of sadness and your refrain; ‘Hold her until she feels again’ is especially deep and moving as it gives witness to such despair. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan FJ Thomas May 13, 2018 at 3:21 PM Good afternoon Susan. Thank you for always sharing such warm comments.