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Until the Very End

Here we are at the end of our marriage remembering the tender words of love that we uttered in our horse and carriage tucked together like the wings on a dove as the world stands far remote we keep bay inside this velvet room of flower and sage counting the blessings of a morning ray sandwiched like two birds in a guilded cage folded inside the sheets of time we thrive accordianed like two insturments of old humming the songs that once made us live encloaked the dark, we never grew cold true love is the diamond of old lovers and friends, I believe that I will love you, until the very end. Jan. 31, 2020

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Date: 2/24/2020 12:48:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win, Pixie.. A masterpiece beautifully crafted, my friend.. Really enjoyed!! Have a blessed day!
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Date: 2/20/2020 9:10:00 PM
Memories of the beginning and still a seed that is still growing. Your ability in giving variety and grace to your fabulous poem it's just beautiful, Pixie. Congratulations on your win on a so romantic verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2020 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your last line. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 2/20/2020 12:29:00 PM
"tucked together like wings on a dove" - that line is so romantic and descriptive of togetherness. "folded inside the sheets of time" is also beautiful. My favorite, though, is "true love is the diamond of old lovers and friends". I just had to stop and read this sonnet over and over. Thank you for sharing this tender love poem with your Soup friends ~ John
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Date: 2/20/2020 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd placement Vie! Very lovely! xxoo
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Date: 2/20/2020 8:00:00 AM
WoW! Pixie, This is so lovely and heartfelt. True love was evident in this write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2020 3:30:00 AM
Pixie well congratulations on this master piece!;)
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Date: 2/2/2020 6:11:00 PM
Beautiful Pixie, sandwiched like two birds in a gilded cage.
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Date: 1/31/2020 1:57:00 PM
- It's both beautiful and the truth, Pixie :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2020 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful !
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Date: 1/31/2020 8:22:00 AM
And probably will love till the end...but not like before...Nice one Pixie
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