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Until the Moon Apologizes

I am dipping into these soupy stars with my little celestial ladle. New born stars rest while being rocked lightly in the cradle. I want to experience every new stars song, I want it to blow me away-- I want to wear their song like a sweater, and have it stitched into the fabric of my day. Makes me want to ride the breeze above these primitive prizes... and drift off on a brief eclipse until the moon apologizes. Farewell to the passion, the moon, the diamond wine. Hello to my future, you're mine, all mine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 2:48:00 PM
- With best wish that the future will be as you expect, a wonderful poem Red! (7) - I wish you a great peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 10:20:00 AM
I am waiting for the sun to apologize. He scorched my heart and dried my lakee..So couldnt cool down the pain. I so loved your wearing of the sweater lines too. Your poetry is always original.. R- Well Done : )
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:39:00 PM
Red B., Soupy Stars, <--- Sweet .. Anyways, I like the wearing a song as a sweater. The line and imagery's unique. Awesome write and title. SKAT
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Date: 11/19/2015 6:33:00 AM
I really enjoyed this! :)
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:32:00 AM
The third verse is so wonderful. If only we could simply put on a sweater to feel the joys in life..sigh. All great lines, Red.
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