Until the Day

Until the day Darkness prevails on this storm battered shore Threatening, the sight of the skies through the mist Weather cast shadows embark to endure Gathering close as a means to exist Lo, now I wander with tears in my eyes Saltwater weepings a’ flow ‘pon the sand Thoughts filled with images linger my cries Where has she gone, I cannot understand An angel, I swear, sent by heaven’s sweet touch Merely her scent or a wisp of her hair Took this poor man deeply into her clutch Eternal longings I cherished to share When on that morning I woke all alone Frantically calling her name to the sea Nary a trace of her beauty now shone Desperate, the waves crashing coldly on me Heartbroken memories taunting my soul Echoing dreams, since have long lost their way Endless, the loneliness taking control Sorrow grips tightly its gloom filled display Lost midst the madness no longer to cease Here I shall stumble, my knees on the ground Take from me please, oh I beg thee release Until the day my true love can be found Good night Soupers Have a great weekend

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Date: 8/20/2018 1:51:00 PM
Love the lines: Lo, now I wander with tears in my eyes Saltwater weepings a’ flow ‘pon the sand. A lovely and sad write!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Kim.
Date: 8/18/2018 4:20:00 PM
Your poetry carries a story every time. It creates pictures in my mind..Like a movie that I wouldn't want to end.So beautiful..and sad and beautiful again.
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one
Date: 8/17/2018 11:05:00 PM
Well expressed!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/17/2018 9:47:00 PM
A wonderful dreamy write of the touch of love...All the best Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you so much.
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